1. Name: Kady
Type: Movie
Comments: This was very well made, you can see that it took a lot of time to make. It showed that she understood the story and that showing the cruelty of animals and then having them befriend the humans.
2. Name: Maddie
Type: Picture
Comments: Maddie showed what the animals were feeling all throughout the book. She used arrows to show how the storyline went. It's easy to tell what's happening because they start off sad, then get happy because they're equal, then sad again because they're being ruled over.. again. Great understanding!
3. Name: Meghann
Type: Picture
Comments: Her picture was very creative and well thought about. It looks nice because she used actual pictures instead of drawing them. The elements were all shown well, but the words were a little hard to read because it was so small.
4. Name: Jake
Type: Picture
Comments: He showed how Napolean was the ruler and that Snowball was innocent. Also showed that Napolean had his guards and that they were a big part in the Revolution also.
5. Name: Nic
Type: Picture
Comments: Nic's project was nice and simple, but he added the writing to explain his thoughts. It symbolizes all the different parts of the pigs wanting to be human.
6. Name: Aaron
Type: Picture
Comments: You can tell he took time planning out the cycle in this. He used the literary elements and showed which characters are parallels to those in the Russian Revolution. He showed all the different animals instead of just the main ones talked about.
7. Name: Kyra and Amaya
Type: Video
Comments: I like how they used puppets. It was something I hadn't seen yet. I enjoy how they showed the commandments and how the pigs disobeyed them and changed them throughout the book.
8. Name: Daryl
Type: Picture
Comments: Very creative, and used sort of an advertising thing instead of just drawing out the plot. He showed the different parallels and he also showed the irony of the different animals.
9. Name: Olivia
Type: Picture
Comments: Nice, and shows how the pigs start acting exactly like humans. Shows the irony but not really much else.
10. Name: Emma
Type: Picture
Comments: I like how she had the truth smudged out because there were some many lies that Napolean was telling. It also shows the parallels to the Russian Revolution.
After looking at my classmates projects, I really don't think my project met the standards. I did something simple and easy and should've thought of something else to show in the picture to show more of the literary elements instead.
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