EXTRA CREDIT - ONE DAY ONLY.

        As I review, my old post about 5-part pargraph, I'm also glancing over at my new 5-part paragraph and making sure to have everything that I got critiqued on last time. The number one thing that I had that was needed the most out of the whole class was to embedded quotes, which I have checked off. I don't think that I did as good of a job this time since I didn't have a whole book of material to use and only a little poem to work with now. On the other hand, I had a large problem of using those stupid, past tense words. I've grown to realize that while you're typing, make sure that all your words are in the present and make them happen "now". I actually, just proof read mine again and made sure that I caught all my errors that I had which were slim to none since I was thinking about changing the words while I was typing my paragraph this time. Also, including the plot summary was an issue of mine that I had in the first go-around. An easy way to clear this part up in your commentary is to not think literal always but to also think out of the picture while writing. When I think more literal, it comes to it where I just start restating what the text said in the first place which is what I'm trying to avoid.